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I just wish there was a way
That I could fix everything for you ...
To make everything fine
'Cause it hurts me so.
I would fly to the sky
And take a star,
Bring it to you,
So you can smile one last time.

That day you cried on my shoulder
Was the day that I knew I wanted to hold you
For ever and ever,
Until the sun caved in,
Till every person faded away,
Till every second became eternal.
I wanted to make everything alright,
Everything alright ...

I just wish there was a way,
A solution to every problem.
Every one of your problems.
I wouldn't care if I was filled with,
Just as long as you were fine!
Hear me angels?
Take this pain away!
From here, not me - I beg you!

Would the only way be immolation?
I would do it, if it was the only solution ...
You would be left though,
Plagued with grief,
Dying slowly,
Hands in face always crying,
Distraught again with problems.
Is there any way?
I will do anything.

But this I say:
I will always be here for you my love,
Always loving,
Caring,
Needing you.
And I guess this is what it comes down to:
I am your solution, you always loving resolution.

[Picture from 'The Notebook']
©2006-2009 ~Black-Manifest
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Just something I wrote a while ago for someone who was really special to me ... No laughing please :P

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:iconsterence:
I like this, purely because pretty much every line in it, i can relate to. It sucks so much to see the ones we love going through so much heartache.

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I was raised by a cup of coffee.
:iconlupyne:
Quite an emotional piece.

You opened and ended it well; and the middle flowed good.

I'm a little confused with this line though: 'From here, not me - I beg you!'
Does it means that the persona wants the angels to take away the pain from the one he loves but not away from him?

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Wolves come in packs, but why not packages?

"The thing about most of you youngsters these days is: you don't know enough to know that you don't know. . . you know?" - Shawn Michaels
:iconblack-manifest:
thanks for the comment :) that was actually a typo :P its sposed to be "from her, not me"

silly mistake! :D thanks for your kind words! :aww:

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Sacrifice, pain, self-belief, commitment --

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i completely agree mate ... just on a more personal note, this person and i broke up a while back and now shes been diagnosed with depression. what a crap world we live in :(

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:iconsterence:
yes indeed. Knowing there's only so much we can do makes it worse. The lines about just wanting to make it all go away say so much...I feel like that all the time..

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I was raised by a cup of coffee.
:iconblack-manifest:
yeah ... sorry ... i also have no idea what to say except thanks and sorry

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Sacrifice, pain, self-belief, commitment --

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hmm ... yeah. its a bummer ... also, i dont think i made her get depression. i realise she was already on the way while we were together

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~> "Fear is made in the mind. Power of light overcomes darkness" <~
-- ~topfox

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Oh...

You're welcome! :)

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Wolves come in packs, but why not packages?

"The thing about most of you youngsters these days is: you don't know enough to know that you don't know. . . you know?" - Shawn Michaels

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